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 |  Subject: Ninja  Sat Sep 27, 2008 4:45 pm | |
| Name:Ninja
Gender:male
Age: 3/4 a year, Winter
Island: reon
Personality: tough. fast and strong. Very muscular. He is cunning,Loyal, kind and open to those he is close to, but cold to everyone else.
Pelt Color:black
Eye Color: yellow
Markings: gold lightning bolts on shoulders, slice out of ear
Ability: lightning
History: His old pack were fighters, and he was trained in their ways. His pack soon turned against themselves and their leader, but he escaped before then, when he was but a pup. He has grown some and is experienced, but is still very young. He is searching for a new life.
Name:Stealth
Gender:female
Personality: same as Ninjas, but she is kinder.
Preferred Form: fox
Preferred Form Appearance: black fox, very fast. Has amber eyes
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shadowwolf445
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| | Subject: Re: Ninja Sat Sep 27, 2008 10:46 pm | |
| i think u need to add one more sentce to your history icestar. remember they have to atleast be a paragraph now | |
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Icestar
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| | Subject: Re: Ninja Sat Oct 04, 2008 3:05 pm | |
| Okay, but I was taught paragraphs were three sentneces or more. | |
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shadowwolf445
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