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Sammy
Dispersal Wolf
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PostSubject: My story!!!   My story!!! Icon_minitimeSun Mar 09, 2008 11:34 pm

I've always written stories, but I could never get them long enough or finish them. Here goes nothing!

Prologue:

Abandoned. That was the only word that was able to cross little Micaya's mind at this moment. A crystal tear dripped down one side of Micaya's face. "Why?" She spoke aloud. Then, another voice answered her, nearly scaring her to death.
"There are many questions in this world, and not many of them are answered." Said the voice hiden in the shadows.
"Who are you? Show yourself!" Micaya cried, all tearfulness lost in the snarl boiling deep in her throat. Micaya was not one to be messed with.
A growl ripped from the throat of the massive wolf that stepped into the clearing where Micaya stood, fur bristling and teeth bared. The large male wolf was covered with scars, most of them partially covered with luscious black fur. "You think you can mess with me?" The brujo asked.
"I know I can." Micaya answered. A coldhearted laugh tore out of the brutes maw. "You would make a nice addition to my army." The wolf sneered. "But you'd have to obey my every command, no matter what it is."

So Micaya is forced to join the savage pack. Every wolf old enough was being trained in the ways of a warrior. Micaya was to start out as the alphas (whom she met in the woods) playtoy. He could do anything he wanted to her until she was promoted to warrior. That is, even if she survives that long.


Viola! Whatcha think? Comment!
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Sammy
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PostSubject: Re: My story!!!   My story!!! Icon_minitimeSun Mar 09, 2008 11:35 pm

The prologue is actually going to be much longer, but I shortened it for now.
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PostSubject: Re: My story!!!   My story!!! Icon_minitimeMon Mar 10, 2008 4:11 am

Err, please don't double post! And its great so far! :wolfsmile:
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Sammy
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PostSubject: Re: My story!!!   My story!!! Icon_minitimeTue Mar 11, 2008 10:33 pm

Thanks! And sorry about the double post. I meant to put it in the first one.
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PostSubject: Re: My story!!!   My story!!! Icon_minitimeTue Mar 11, 2008 10:42 pm

great story

are you gonna write more?
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PostSubject: Re: My story!!!   My story!!! Icon_minitimeTue Mar 11, 2008 11:15 pm

Possibly *sly smile*
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PostSubject: Re: My story!!!   My story!!! Icon_minitimeFri Mar 14, 2008 2:15 am

Well, I can't wait!
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PostSubject: Re: My story!!!   My story!!! Icon_minitimeThu Mar 27, 2008 11:01 pm

I like it, but you should have somethings he does (ex. slapping with paw)

otherwise its great!


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